For those of you who don't know, I do my Tuesday Teaser's differently (and yes, I add this disclaimer every time). Each week, I feature a teensy snippet of something I've written, leave it up all day, then remove it around 11 PM. You're welcome to comment on it, love it, hate it, or simply read it at your leisure...if you'd like, of course.
If you're a writer and you'd like to participate in this, please feel free to grab the image and do so, as well. So, without further ado...here we go!
Oh, and as a quick aside...for those of you that love YA books, both Elle and Kara made really interesting points about the similarities between many YA novels today. I highly suggest you check them out!
Thanks for the link!
ReplyDeleteGreat teaser, too, wow. This isn't from the same book I read from today, is it? Emma/Ellia? Is it from book two?
It's a totally different book...my new WIP...something I'm liking a heck of a lot more :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome teaser! You're such a great writer. Your Tuesday teasers are ones I'm going to be looking forward to reading each week.
ReplyDeleteSo this was really wonderful to read. I just read and read and then it was over and now I am desperate for more. You are a great writer. *props*
ReplyDeleteThis was fun to read. Definitely a good teaser as I want to see what happens next. The only thing that took me out of the story (and I confirmed this with Alyssa and Gregory) was when the teacher says, "I've had enough of your crap." While we haven't read your whole story, in our experience, teachers using the word 'crap' like this toward a student doesn't usually happen. It's unprofessional and immature. Unless you're setting up this teacher's character as a such, I'd change that.
ReplyDeleteHope you don't mind the suggestion, just thought you'd like some genuine YA feedback.
Wow, that is a great teaser!! I kept scrolling in hopes for more ;)
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what you come up with again on next Tuesday!